Wednesday, November 14, 2007

adhoori kavita

maine likhi hai ek kavita
thodi udaas sii, thodi khoi hui sii
mere mann ka haal batati hui
meri aankhon ka raaz kholti hui
akeli sii, ek gumnaam kavita

maine likhi hai ek kavita
thodi dari hui sii, thodi khamosh sii
mere dil ka hal batati hui
mere andhere kamre ka raaz kholti hui
shant sii ek chup chap kavita

maine likhi thi ek kavita
thodi tooti hui sii, thodi puri sii
ek aadhi adhoori kavita


This one is special my first after a year and first in Hindi... never felt better after writing something and leaving this one unfinished and calling it 'adhoori kavita'.

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3 Comments:

Blogger Vaibhav Bansal said...

Aadhe adhoore, teri kaitha poori ki porri hai..Amazing...One more gem came out of my dost,

8:39 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

beautiful ..... !

12:22 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

beautiful ..... !

12:22 PM  

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